求职信常用句型分析
学习啦在线学习网 写求职信的目的在于获得职位,一封求职信无论如何文辞并茂,令人心动,公司HR主管不见到应聘者本人是不会给予工作机会的。接下来,小编给大家准备了求职信常用句型分析,欢迎大家参考与借鉴。
求职信常用句型分析
求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。许多人都会copy网上的求职信范本,导致千篇一律,这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信,这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。
一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的,有些专家认为不宜用分词句子,比如用下面的句子做开头,因为这样的句子被人用得大多,显得陈腐,失去特点。
Replying to your advertisement...
Answering your advertisement...
Believing that there is an opportunity...
学习啦在线学习网 Thinking that there is a vacancy1 in your company...
Having read your ad...
学习啦在线学习网 再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。
A:
学习啦在线学习网 (1) Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager.
(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will meet your exacting2 requirements.
B:
(1) I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's Journal that you are offering just the opportunity I am looking for.
学习啦在线学习网 (2) Your advertisement in this morning's Journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.
C:
学习啦在线学习网 (1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2) In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting3. Please consider me an applicant4 for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified5 for this work.
二、在提到希望得到的待遇时,可用类似的句子:
学习啦在线学习网 I'd prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, I consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.
It's hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed I would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.
I don't feel that I should set my own salary, as I am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship6.
三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用:
As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would ,500 a month be too much?
Do you think I would be asking too much if I said 5,000 dollars a month?
You know what my services are worth better than I do. All I want is a living wage.
学习啦在线学习网 四、关于求职信的结尾用语,下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。
A:
(1)软弱、羞怯的: If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you.
(2)改写后(较佳): If my qualifications meet your standards, I would be happy to speak with you in person.
B:
学习啦在线学习网 (1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的: If you are interested, please let me know immediately, as I'm sure an interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.
(2)改写后:I would like to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.
C:
(1) 哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.
学习啦在线学习网 (2) 改写后: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone number is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.
扩展:中国学历的标准翻译
GLOSSARY OF CHINESE TERMS
学习啦在线学习网 《中华人民共和国学位条例》 “Regulations Concerning Academic Degrees in the People’s Republic of China”
学习啦在线学习网 结业证书 Certificate of Completion
毕业学习啦在线学习网证书 Certificate of Graduation
学习啦在线学习网 肄业证书 Certificate of Completion/Incompletion/
Attendance/Study
教育学习啦在线学习网学院 College/Institute of Education
学习啦在线学习网 中学 Middle [Secondary] School
学习啦在线学习网 师范学校 Normal School [upper secondary level]
师范专科学校 Normal Specialised Postsecondary College
师范大学 Normal [Teachers] University
公正书 Notarial Certificate
专科学校 Postsecondary Specialised College
广播电视大学 Radio and Television University
学习啦在线学习网 中等专科学校 Secondary Specialised School
自学考试 Self-Study Examination
学习啦在线学习网 技工学校 Skilled Workers [Training] School
业余大学 Spare-Time University
学习啦在线学习网 职工大学 Staff and Workers University
大学 University (regular,degree-granting)
职业大学 Vocational University
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