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如何写出英语高分作文

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如何写出英语高分作文

  英语作文是一项综合能力的考试,主要是考学生对词汇、语法和句子结构以及连句成文的掌握程度。笔者认为,要想让学生在规定的30分钟内写出一篇较好的作文,教师应该在平时的课堂教学中认真指导学生注重审题、切题、连贯通顺、语法正确、语言规范这五个环节。本文旨在谈谈在写出英语高分作文这个方面的具体作法。

  如何写出英语高分作文

  一、写作诀窍

  总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;

  关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;

学习啦在线学习网   组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;

  字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。

  二、写作步骤

  1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

学习啦在线学习网   2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

学习啦在线学习网   3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。

学习啦在线学习网   4.先草稿,后抄写。

  三、习作点评

学习啦在线学习网   [2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

学习啦在线学习网   Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.

学习啦在线学习网   ﹒what exactly your hobby is;

学习啦在线学习网   ﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;

  ﹒why you enjoy your hobby;

  ﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.

  写作要求:

学习啦在线学习网   1. 根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

  2. 条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。

  3. 词数60-80。

  [学生习作a]

学习啦在线学习网   My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .

  I became interested in reading books. I like needing books

学习啦在线学习网   Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn

  a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me

  how to be a good person . Books even can solve many

学习啦在线学习网   problems for me . I will read more good books to improve

  myself.

学习啦在线学习网   ①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。

学习啦在线学习网   ②also的位置应放在can之后。

学习啦在线学习网   [点评]:档次9-11分。

  ①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。

  ②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述① ② ③问题。

  ③有少量错误。

  [学生习作b]

学习啦在线学习网   My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .

  When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before

学习啦在线学习网   I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting

学习啦在线学习网   that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read

  books by myself .little by little I became interested in

  reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting

  things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the

  beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my

  writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study

  hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .

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