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高级英语写作手法(2)

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高级英语写作手法

  高级英语写作手法3

  11. 轻度抱怨:

  Unfortunately, + 表示 something is wrong 的句子

  环境:

学习啦在线学习网   A company has sent you a bill for the wronggoods.

  Unfortunately you sent us a bill for the wronggoods. Please could you send us a correct bill assoon as possible.

学习啦在线学习网   Your new photocopier has broken down. Youhave to write to the company who sold it to you.

学习啦在线学习网   Unfortunately our new photocopier has broken down. Please could you send a repairman tofix it for us as soon as possible.

学习啦在线学习网   Two temporary secretaries do not speak English. You have to write to the agency whosent them to you.

  Unfortunately two temporary secretaries you recommended to us do not speak English.We would be grateful if you could recommend two more who could speak English.

学习啦在线学习网   You keep receiving letters for someone else. You have to write to the post office.

  Unfortunately I keep receiving letters for someone else. Please could you make the addressclear before you deliver letters every day.

  12. 提醒某人对某事的注意:

  I should like to draw your attention to (the fact that)…

学习啦在线学习网   I should like to point out that …

  如果你提醒的事情对方已经知道(你想表达你的生气):

  I should like to remind you that…

  I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that …

  环境:

学习啦在线学习网   One of your staff keeps parking his car in front of the main door, the space which isreserved for the MD.

  I should like to remind you that the space in front of the main door is reserved for the MD.

  Someone is interested in purchasing a large quantity of your simplex cameras. Tell himabout 25% discount for large orders.

学习啦在线学习网   I should like t draw your attention to the fact that we offer about 25% discount for largerorders.

学习啦在线学习网   One of your staff arrives half an hour late for work every day. (She should start at 9.30.)

  I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that work start at 9: 30 every day.

  Someone is interested in your products. Tell him that you guarantee that your prices arethe largest in the country.

学习啦在线学习网   I should like to point out that we guarantee that all prices are the lowest in the country.

  13. 要求某人采取行动:

  We must insist that …DO… (DO指动词原型)

学习啦在线学习网   注:请注意这一句型和句型8的区别。

  环境:

  We must insist that you deliver the goods immediately.

  14. 警告:

  Unless…

  If…(not)…

  We will be forced to …

  环境:(What warnings would you give these people?)

  A company that has not paid your bill

学习啦在线学习网   Unless you pay the bill, we will be forced to take legal actions.

学习啦在线学习网   Another company that is using your company’s car park

学习啦在线学习网   If you do not move your car away from our park, we will be forced to turn to the police.

  An employee who always arrives late for work

  Unless you come to work on time, we will be forced to fire you.

  A builder who has left a lot of their tools in your office

学习啦在线学习网   If you do not take your tools from our office, we will be forced to throw them away.

  15. 强烈抱怨:

  注:

学习啦在线学习网   强烈抱怨遵循以下步骤:

学习啦在线学习网   a. 阐述发生的问题:it is now over nine months since we placed this order and we are stillwaiting for the cabinets.

学习啦在线学习网   b. 使用句型12:I should like to point out that we have already paid for these cabinets.

  c. 使用句型 13:we must insist that you deliver them immediately.

  d. 使用句型14:unless we hear from you within 7 days we will take legal action.

  高级英语写作手法4

学习啦在线学习网   写作后的检查(包括图表写作)

  检查的四个主要方面:

  1、标点符号:

  完全禁用的符号:

学习啦在线学习网   :“” 《》。

  2、拼写:

  双写辅音

  y改成复数

  3、语法:

  主谓一致

  冠词

  次序

  介词

  时态

  漏词

  4、可能导致信息表达不清的因素:

  太长的段落

  太长的句子

学习啦在线学习网   运用不常使用的词汇

  一次包含太多的信息

  信息不完整

  信息顺序混乱

  图表作文

学习啦在线学习网   对于线性图表的描述

  上升

学习啦在线学习网   1、 对于上升趋势的描述:

  a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组:

  to increase

学习啦在线学习网   to go up

  to rise

  to grow

  to jump

  to leap

  to soar

  to shoot

学习啦在线学习网   to pick up

学习啦在线学习网   b. 可以使用的名词:

学习啦在线学习网   an increase

学习啦在线学习网   a growth

  a jump

  a soar

  an upward trend

学习啦在线学习网   2、对于上升到某个位置的描述:

  a. 1. a. 中的动词+to+具体数据。

学习啦在线学习网   b. 1. a. 中的动词+to+the peak of+具体数据。

  c. 1. a. 中的动词+reaching the peak of +具体数据。

学习啦在线学习网   d. 1. a. 中的动词+reaching + 具体数据。

  e. to peak at + 具体数据

  f. to climb to + 具体数据

  3、对于上升的程度的描述:

学习啦在线学习网   a. 1. a. 中的动词+by + 具体数据。

  b. 1. a. 中的动词+副词。

学习啦在线学习网   对于平稳的趋势的描述,可以使用的动词或动词词组:

学习啦在线学习网   to hardly change

学习啦在线学习网   to have little change

  to keep steady

学习啦在线学习网   to level off

  to remain constant

  to stay the same

学习啦在线学习网   表示程度的副词:

  1、程度较大:

学习啦在线学习网   considerably

  dramatically

  greatly

  markedly

学习啦在线学习网   obviously

  quickly

  rapidly

  sharply

学习啦在线学习网   significantly

学习啦在线学习网   suddenly

  2、程度较小:

学习啦在线学习网   slightly

  gradually

  slowly

学习啦在线学习网   steadily

  时间的嵌入

  嵌入时间时所使用的介词和介词词组:

  in

  from……to……

  between…….and……

学习啦在线学习网   during……and……

  at the start of ……

学习啦在线学习网   by the end of ……

  over ……

学习啦在线学习网   at the end of ……

学习啦在线学习网   throughout ……

学习啦在线学习网   时间’s + 具体数据

  高级英语写作手法5

学习啦在线学习网   上升和下降趋势的组合描述(嵌入了时间和程度之后):

  1. 先上升后下降的句型:

学习啦在线学习网   ...... increased slowly during…… and …… but fellsharply in …….

学习啦在线学习网   A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followedthe sharp increase in …….

  2. 先下降后上升的句型:

学习啦在线学习网   …… fell before …… began to make a recovery ……

学习啦在线学习网   …… continue the recovery, climbing to ……

学习啦在线学习网   …… dropped during …… but increased again in ……

学习啦在线学习网   …… fell and then pick up during ……

学习啦在线学习网   …… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……

学习啦在线学习网   3. 起伏波动的句型:

  …… fluctuated sharply all through ……

  4. 波动不大的句型:

学习啦在线学习网   …… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……

  柱状图形的描述

  转换为线形图形的描述

  饼状图形的描述

  对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型:

  …… % the …… is/has/have/are ……

  …… accounts for ……% of the total

  …… takes up ……% in the whole chart

  趋势的比较

  1. 表示相似的句型 (实例) :

学习啦在线学习网   Both share prices rose sharply in January.

  Neither company has made a profit yet.

学习啦在线学习网   Like X, Y fell in June.

学习啦在线学习网   X rose just as sharply as Y.

  2. 表示差异的句型(实例):

  X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.

学习啦在线学习网   X fell quickly compared to Y.

  Unlike Y, X rose by 10%.

  X rose far more dramatically than Y.

  3. 表示倍数的句型:

  the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……

  4. 客观比较的句型:

学习啦在线学习网   …… is …… in contrast to ……

  

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